Tuesday, 14 January 2020

Jessica Watson

WALT: complete the summer learning journey
jessica sailed around the world in a boat by herself, when she was on her boat she crashed into a huge ship but was not hurt so she carried on then when she got back to Australia there when lots of cheering fans a then the priminister named her Australias newest hero then she said "no i am not a hero i am an ordinary person.this is just prof that anyone can do anything" she was sixteen when she did that. Do you like sailing? this image is from Kate Dyer

  
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  1. Shannon at the SLJ Team25 January 2020 at 16:58

    Kia Ora Emily,

    Jessica Watson is definitely a great Australian hero and you’ve done a superb job summarising her achievements. I love your choice of image and the quote you have included.

    She was the youngest person to ever sail around the world. Have you ever sailed? If so where to?

    Remember to proof-read your work and if the sentence seems a bit long to shorten it or make it two sentences. Snappier paragraphs can have a better effect at conveying things to your readers.

    Hei konā mai,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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