Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 5 December 2019
Respectful Rewards
at school our term has been full of reward's my favourite reward would be the water fight.
I loved writing this augment because you could make your own dream rewards.
I prefer when we could go outside or go on our devices because there were two options for outside or inside devices and if you didnt like one of them you could do another one and also that your could use any outside bikes or other things and also you could use any devices (except for the tv) what is your dream reward?
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We have had some fun rewards this year. A highlight for me was the fort day. I like the way you have considered everybody in your preferred reward. Consider that punctuation. 68 posts for 2019 is awesome Emily. Keep it up! What would your dream be if you could have ANYTHING?
ReplyDeletethank you for the comment Mr grey,
ReplyDeletei appreciate the feedback, my dream would be a zoo that you didn't have to clean up after the animals pooped!
Cool idea. I would enjoy this class trip. I loved going to Turanga but if it could be anywhere... maybe Kelly Tarlton's in Auckland because I had a lot of fun with this a few years ago. What has been your favourite family trip?
ReplyDeletei really loved Bali just not the 9 hour plane trip
ReplyDeletei enjoyed riding the elephants but one farted in front of us so I thought i would never get out of there alive!