Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Saturday, 11 January 2020
Achieving my dream.
my dream is to be an Architect and to shoot for the stars so I have made tips on how I can achieve
my dreams as well as give you a boost.Think as your dream as a dart board and you are learning to throw darts and soon you will hit it in the bulls eye. What is your dream and how will you achieve it?
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Kia Ora Emily,
ReplyDeleteWow, becoming an architect is such a cool job. You have listed so many great things to do to achieve your dream and I particularly like how you have included a motivational picture to your poster. I’m proud of you!
When I was in high school, I took an economics paper and decided I wanted to become an economist. They help people allocate their resources to satisfy the most wants and work out ways to distribute, supply, and produce goods for companies. How did you decide you wanted to become an architect? Do you know what you have to do to become an architect?
Have you considered increasing the size of your text so it is easier for your readers to see?
Hei konā mai,
Shannon (SLJ)