Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 10 January 2020
Beautifully Brave
My Granddad was a prisoner of war and he served in berma and India I think he is so brave, he is turning 95 today! so good on him though he rarely ever talks about it. Who is a brave person in your family?
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Kia Ora Emily,
ReplyDeleteWow your Granddad sounds like an incredibly brave man. That would’ve been such a scary experience for him, he must’ve had to be incredibly strong and resilient. Happy 95th birthday to him!
Have you ever had to do something incredibly brave? Was it hard or easy? Can you tell me about i?
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Hei konā mai,
Shannon (SLJ)