Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday, 12 January 2020
Becoming the william sisters
Venus Is a world famous tennis player and her sister is too her sisters name is Serena, Serena and her Older sister Venus, quite often Vs each other. Serena Williams is ranked the first in the world rankings and her sister is no. 7. Serena won the most grand slams [23] than any human in the world.
Do you like tennis why/why not? this Image is from cheat sheet.com
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I enjoy hitting the tennis ball around, though I’m not sure of the rules of tennis. They are amazing athletes so strong looking.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Emily,
ReplyDeleteVenus and Serena Williams are incredible athletes. You’ve summarised a lot of facts about them brilliantly and I like the way you have structured your post is exceptional.
Did you know that despite Serena being the top ranked female tennis player in the world, she doesn’t even feature in the top 50 paid athletes in the world, all are male. Do you think that is fair, should women and men be paid the same for the same job or is there a logical reason for this disparity?
Have you considered moving your hyperlink below your image to make the post a little neater?
Hei konā mai,
Shannon (SLJ)