Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 13 January 2020
Colourful Christchurch citty
Christchurch is my home town and I love that, Whats your home town?
I love christchurch because of all the nice people have you ever been her before?
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Kia Ora Emily,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve chosen some amazing artwork for this post. Christchurch has so many amazing attractions and the Antarctic Centre and OranaWildlife Park are definitely some of the highlights. Last year I went to a lot of tourist attractions in the Garden City with my friend. We both loved seeing the Giraffes and Orangutans in Orana Park; and the snowmobile was so much fun at the Antarctic Centre. We also went on the gondola which was fun but a bit scary for my friend whos afraid of heights.
What’s your favourite attraction in Christchurch?
It looks really amazing and I love your use of green to represent the botanic gardens, but had you thought about using a different font colour to really make your post stand out? You could also increase the size of the text or make it bold to really make it pop.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon (SLJ)