Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 12 May 2020
The Creepy Chaperon Rouge
This was a retell on The little red riding hood story,I enjoyed this because i enjoy creepy stories, but I also thought it was quite ruff at the end. if you don't like the creeps then you won't like this story, it was of a girl that was exploring the ruins of a castle then she fell asleep in the old ruins, and had a nightmare of the rock she had been previously exploring turned into a evil spirit and the tree died and the sky turned red and the grass turned red and then grew big teeth, and then other spirits came out of the trees and then she woke up with a look of dismay on her face the realised the campfire had gone out and then the ruins had cracked in them she had never seen before then the spirits chased her to an old castle, then she enters it, through the doorway she went then the doorway turned into a monster and ate her. here is a link to the video be WARNED Chaperon Rouge
do you like creepy stories?
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Hi Emily. I like the warning! It is quite creepy. I think the ending leaves you unsure of what happens next. You have written a detailed retell of the video. Next time check where you could use full stops instead of commas.
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