The Ridiculous Robot story

WALT: write a story about a robot

Today at school we have been writing a narrative about a robot, we have been having heaps of fun writing it, my favourite part was doing the candy land exhibit part,it was really fun doing it my imagination can run wild. What is your favourite part of the story? give me some feedback?

Once there was a robot, he was wondering where he came from, you asked him what the symbol was on his hip, the robot said ¨I didn't really notice it but I thought it was for decoration¨, you remeber you noticed the same symbol when you were at the candyland exhibit in the New Station Museum, you agree to travel with the robot to the NSM to see where he came from, you and your robot companion went  to the NSM, ¨candyland?¨ the robot asked, ¨pretty much¨ you say , you could see that the robot was hyped for candy land 

When we arrived at the NSM the robot looked at the museum and said ¨this is a big day¨ they moved into the museum.

The lady at the museum said ¨what exhibit?¨ ¨the candyland one please¨ you say she nodded her head and gives you the ticket, you move into the exhibit, ¨wow says the robot¨ then he looks to the left and there was about 15 robots with the same marking on there hip and they looked the same as him. You soon see a man in a business suit, and he says ¨is this robot for sale?¨ ¨No way!¨ I say, ¨after all it is mine¨ ¨they work at the gold mine¨ he says  the robot looks at you with a look of dismay, ¨ He is better off in the forest¨ the robot looks at you a gives you a leaf ¨lets go home he says¨ yeah you say and then you go home ¨that was an adventure you say, you explore the waterfall and the beach and then home, You decide to go home, when you go home the robot wanted to explore more places he said that he wanted to explore more and sure enough they became explorers.

image from the literacy shed