Thursday, 21 May 2020

Nice Narritive!

WALT:write a narrative freehand
I love writing narratives because almost anything can happen, it really lets your brain run wild, I really enjoyed this task because I could make it different to the normal fairy-tale by combining them together. if you could write a narrative right now on the spot what would it be about?   
       
The little pigs were delighted to move here, in the woods but when they heard about the creepy wolves that
stalk the very forest their lovely plan of living here turned to custard.Then suddenly a sickening sound hit the
roof and the pigs started to get terrified,
then they started to run, then heard a noise, a girl in a red hood came and said ¨that's not a good idea.
Then she said to run east, and the pigs followed, she was very mysterious,
with her red hood flapping in the woods


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They finally came to safety in a big castle with a big draw bridge over hanging the edge of the cliff
.¨whatever you do,
don't go through the big archway”
said the girl in the big hood,will it eat you alive? The pigs asked,¨yes¨ she said.They shivered with fear.
We must get the staff that will banish the wolves so that we will never be scared again! OK the pigs replied,
they travelled to the top of the castle and retrieved the magic  staff,
then they headed to the forest to get those hungry wolves! Soon they found them,
those wolves were scattering troubling messages around to wolf to wolf like they were patrolling the forest.
The staff was pulled out of the red hooded girls sack and then the evil wolves were sucked into
the magical staff then they were finally banished to another world and the pig lived happily ever after. The end.

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