Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 18 May 2020
You Deserve Duffy!
Today we received our Duffy books, we were all really thankful and SUPER excited and happy, I enjoyed this because it is a great source of knowledge to learn from something you enjoy! and hand chose! I got Zombies birthday apocalypse, I think it will be about a zombie having a birthday because of the title and invited Steve and his parents may not agree that he invited him and they got really angry and crashed the party. I also got amulet, I think it might be of an evil robot and some people with magic amulets save the city's from the evil robot, These books were written by Zack Zombie Amulets (author name unknown). and a BIG thanks to Duffy for giving us these awesome books for free, that is amazing!. Do you think I am right?
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Hi Emily. You are a blogging pro! I love the title, it grabs my attention and makes me want to read. Next time consider how you lay out your writing. Maybe breaking up your paragraph would be easier to read and encourage your audience. I think you are spot on saying it's amazing to get free books. What is your favourite Duffy book ever?
ReplyDeletekena koe e hoa Nick,
ReplyDeletethanks so much for the comment, I enjoyed how you gave me feed back
I agree with it,you really thought about this comment, my favourite would probably be the book Wyrd it was super cool.
many thanks Emily