Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 July 2020
Wonderful would you rather number 2
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteI love your blog post! I thought it was very interesting to read. Maybe next time you could create another slide to break up the writing. I would rather be a eagle so I can fly.
Caitlyn
hi Emily I like lion
ReplyDeleteHi Emily I really like your argument I agree with you I would rather be a lion too!
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