Friday, 17 July 2020

Burnt a short story

WALT: do the winter learning journey 
We had to remake frozen, so then I made burnt the short story, my favourite part of this was writing about Elsie. What was yours? this image is from Tenor

Elsie was a fire warden she lived in a town called Arendale and sometimes she wished she had a sister and she liked to hold things in, she loved to build a snowman and wished she could have someone to be her friend and was the only one who could control her powers. 


She had a friend called firelof and he had a close friend called Samatha, she was more than real. She was the wind, the autumn leaves were her friend and samantha came quite close to Elsie, they soon went to the Alps for Samantha's dream pictures to hang in her living room so they journeyed to the Alps and there it was the dream picture, Samantha took the picture and then yelled We got it then they ran back to Arendale. She gave it to the printers then when samantha got the picture back she realised that her finger was in the way, “Elsie your massive finger is in the way” oh well it was a journey. The end



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