Friday, 27 March 2020

What cool Writing

WALT: Carrie on from the story starter
I enjoyed this post because I thought that the picture I used as my inspiration was so cool
 I really like doing story starters. whats your favourite part of writing?Snip..Snip…Snip…The scissors began to tear the countryside apart. Towns, fields, rivers and oceans. Forests, valleys, mountains and lakes. The world began to unravel piece by piece, strand by strand.
This was to be a new beginning. What would this new world look like?
answer: Soon the world will be like lego platforms space seeping through breathable air and 
There will be nothing but strips of green grass floating in thin air, shops ripped up and even houses people once inhabited and now gone all gone, all because of the giant invisible scissors, legend has it that it was a giants pair of scissors,I think that it was because of global warming.

Soon to get to the shop down the road you have to do a platformer. To be honest it's good for our  health. One day the scissors teared up the old queens castle then it stopped right in front of the local school  the parents were glad that the children were safe but the Queen was very unlucky, her house was chopped up to little tiny pieces, the scissors had disappeared into thin air and then a miracle happened, the giant glue came along and reglued us back together, and good to say, we are all safe now.



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