Friday, 27 November 2020

Strange Story

 WALT: Collaborate to create an interesting narrative

At school we had to write a narrative, with someone a different gender and a sentence each, This activity was really weird but it came together to make a interesting story, and what an interesting story it was. I did the narrative with Lochy. My favourite part was reading at the end. What do you like about this story?


Name

Sentence

Start

The door swung open revealing...

Lochy

The kid that wants bekfast.

Lochy

A kid's mum stormed towards him. What are you doing!!! said the mum.

The kid answered with bekfast. 

Emily

The parent looked at him blankly, Bekfast? 

Lochy

Now!! Said the kid alright ahhh screamed the mum she called the fbi.

Emily

The FBI said bekfast with a side of meme salad? 

Lochy 

The mum said my son has been kidnapped and replaced with a spy.

Emily

The FBI said oh that is really nice? Wait what? Well your kid is insane!!

Lochy

(crying sounds) why yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Emily

I´m sorry but your son Has to go because of Bekfast 

lochy

The mother said okay fine come get him the fbi said well be there in five

Emily

Ok and bring bekfast! 

lochy

Then the mother waited for five minutes until finally the FBI came,

then started  kicking the door open,

fbi opened up they said.

emily

They took the kid in the white van and inside was an all you can eat buffet and some other stuff 

lochy

The kid said bekfast??? The FBI said yes bekfast 

lochy

The end. 





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