WALT: Collaborate to create an interesting narrative
At school we had to write a narrative, with someone a different gender and a sentence each, This activity was really weird but it came together to make a interesting story, and what an interesting story it was. I did the narrative with Lochy. My favourite part was reading at the end. What do you like about this story?
Name | Sentence |
Start | The door swung open revealing... |
Lochy | The kid that wants bekfast. |
Lochy | A kid's mum stormed towards him. What are you doing!!! said the mum. The kid answered with bekfast. |
Emily | The parent looked at him blankly, Bekfast? |
Lochy | Now!! Said the kid alright ahhh screamed the mum she called the fbi. |
Emily | The FBI said bekfast with a side of meme salad? |
Lochy | The mum said my son has been kidnapped and replaced with a spy. |
Emily | The FBI said oh that is really nice? Wait what? Well your kid is insane!! |
Lochy | (crying sounds) why yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Emily | I´m sorry but your son Has to go because of Bekfast |
lochy | The mother said okay fine come get him the fbi said well be there in five |
Emily | Ok and bring bekfast! |
lochy | Then the mother waited for five minutes until finally the FBI came, then started kicking the door open, fbi opened up they said. |
emily | They took the kid in the white van and inside was an all you can eat buffet and some other stuff |
lochy | The kid said bekfast??? The FBI said yes bekfast |
lochy | The end. |
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