WALT: write a story from another perspective
On Thursday Mr Gray brought the lambs to school they where really cute, my favourite part was when we got to look at them barring and sleeping. What is your favourite Animal and why?
Dear diary,
It was a relaxing morning at the farm, I was out in the field when suddenly I sensed something was wrong, I could tell because the family looking after me was talking around me, then disaster struck when two enormous hands picked me up and I struggled and struggled hoping I would be set free but the hands only gripped me tighter. Then I was put in a large metal object, A vacuum cleaner? A rubbish bin? A robot? What was it?. Suddenly I was taken to a prison? A camp? So many things I am unsure about.
When I entered there were a few children and then a number started growing, where to step, where to eat, where to sleep, so many new senses. Suddenly the noise took a hike it was so loud, but it calmed down after a while and then a few girls that the farmer man called ´Charlee´ and ´Scarlett’ took me out for a walk, They went out into the grassy paddock with me but I didn't like it so I started to lye down because I was certain I didn't want to go in.
Man this is gonna be a long day…
Hi Emily this was really cool I like the picture My favourite animal is a cat because they are so cute.
ReplyDeleteHi Emily I really like your blog post about the lambs but maybe next time you could make the letters a bit bigger other than that its really good.
ReplyDeleteHi Emily I really like this blog post because you have a lot of information in it and i like the photo of me and the Lambs i thought the lambs were so cute.It was funny when they kept pooing and peeing. My favourite animal would be probably a dog because they are really cute.
ReplyDeleteWhat was your favourite animals and why?