Monday, 19 October 2020

Ridiculous recount

 WALT: write a recount on the holidays 

At school today we wrote a recount, I wrote one on the sleepover I had with Logan, it was very fun, we use a plan form by writing it in little steps and then putting them all together to make our fabulous recount, I found it really successful, and fun. My favourite part was to write it using the plan because it worked really well. What was your favourite thing you did in the holidays?



My successful sleepover

Have you ever done VR?

On Sunday Mum got a text that asked if I could go to Logan's

house for a sleepover, that

got me really hyped, so I packed, and left for Logans.

My stomach had butterflies and was

overflowing with happiness. When we got there Logan welcomed me in and then we went to her room,

and talked for a little while.  


When Logan and I got settled we ran outside and talked

on the trampoline for an hour or so,

as we jumped we recounted what we did and how we

were going.

After that we played

Zelda breath of the wild,

I played on my switch and she played on hers,

then we saved our game and walked

to the park we hid in the bushes

and practiced being hiding masters and testing

our hiding spots in the playground,

then talked in the bushes for a little while,

Then we came in and had some dinner,

we had sausages and curly fries


Then while Logan's brothers and sisters

were going to bed we played some more Zelda and some VR.

My favourite game was a game where you had to defend all

the toys in the bedroom, by defeating

these evil block monsters.

And you had to use your fists or your laser gun,

to punch or hit the bad guys and save the bedroom,

and the toys! 


This was an amazing way to wrap up the holidays, back to school already?

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