Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 1 July 2019
Old miss cranky frog
it's all because she's blind that's why she need glasses , but they don´t help. Let me describe her,
she has a sharp stare that could kill a hungry lion , her dangly ear lobs as long as a pigs tail
her dress as dirty as a rotten pig.
She eats baby food because she doesn´t have any teeth her dress has a light background with a finishing touch of purple flowers covering most of it and light grey hair as flaky as cereal, and as her name suggests she is very very cranky!
Her glasses make her look a lot more elderly and her twisty smile could kill a whole pack of wolves .
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She sounds like a very scary neighbour to have, maybe she’s grumpy because she can’t see very well. Funny description of her appearance.
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