Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday, 7 July 2019
Maui and the big fish
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Great story following the legend of Maui, wonderful retelling of the myth.
ReplyDeleteI think Maui would have felt very grateful and honoured, then annoyed that his brothers started to butcher the whale before their God was praised and thanked.
Next time maybe work on paragraphs in your blog.
Keep up the great work.