WALT: write persuasive writing about New Brighton
At school today we are learning how to write a persuasive slide making people want to come to New Brighton, it is truly a great place and more people should visit. My favourite part of this was writing about the pier. What is your Favourite slide?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
kia ora Emily i like your writing you did it reminds me of when me and my mum took the dog for a walk on the beach. maybe next time you could change the background
ReplyDeletehi emily I like the new Britotin I like the prier I have not seen it like it
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